So it took me longer than I thought to get chapter one revised. But…I think it’s so much better. If anyone reads it, please tell me what you think. I especially want to know a few things: Do you like Ethan? Do you care what happens next? Would you want to keep reading?
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Shari Writes · writing…getting published…a lot of work
I left a comment on the chapter you posted. Looking good.
It’s always exciting to have the opening chapter on paper and in a real tangible form that you can hold and know it’s not your imagination!
Embrace that momentum and plow through some serious word count. I’ve got a knack for spotting someone who will eventually get the job done, and by the looks of it, my gut is saying you will.
But it’s going to take a lot of perseverance. Keep at it and good luck. I’ll be watching you. I just put a link to this blog on my page!