I’m not sure what to say here. I bought the book. I finished. And… I don’t know. I really enjoyed the first two books in this series. The third one I liked, except that I thought it was too long (yea, I’d cut at least a third). Still, I loved the story and the characters and the world. I felt this book had the same problem with wordiness (yes, I skimmed large sections), but like before, I was all into the story. And then it ended and I was like “what??????” Maybe it’s just me because I know why he did what he did and I understand it even. I just didn’t like it. Especially after investing so much time into such a huge book. *shrugs* I don’t know. If you love fantasy, especially complex world building type fantasy, read it. You’ll like it. Just be prepared for a lot of words and an ending that might not be as you expected.
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So, yes, I’ve been gone for a while, but it’s for a good reason. I’ve been reading, and reading, and reading…oh and writing. I’m going to try to catch upon all the books I’ve read, but I wanted to start with a series that I really loved. It’s called The Seven Realms by Cinda Williams Chima. There are three books so far: The Demon King, The Exiled Queen, and the Gray Wolf Throne. A fourth book comes out in Fall 2012.
Here’s a blurb for The Demon King: Times are hard in the mountain city of Fellsmarch. Reformed thief Han Alister will do almost anything to eke out a living for himself, his mother, and his sister Mari. Ironically, the only thing of value he has is something he can’t sell. For as long as Han can remember, he’s worn thick silver cuffs engraved with runes. They’re clearly magicked—as he grows, they grow, and he’s never been able to get them off.
While out hunting one day, Han and his Clan friend, Dancer catch three young wizards setting fire to the sacred mountain of Hanalea. After a confrontation, Han takes an amulet from Micah Bayar, son of the High Wizard, to ensure the boy won’t use it against them. Han soon learns that the amulet has an evil history—it once belonged to the Demon King, the wizard who nearly destroyed the world a millennium ago. With a magical piece that powerful at stake, Han knows that the Bayars will stop at nothing to get it back.
Meanwhile, Raisa ana’Marianna, Princess Heir of the Fells, has her own battles to fight. She’s just returned to court after three years of relative freedom with her father’s family at Demonai camp – riding, hunting, and working the famous Clan markets. Although Raisa will become eligible for marriage after her sixteenth name-day, she isn’t looking forward to trading in her common sense and new skills for etiquette tutors and stuffy parties.
Raisa wants to be more than an ornament in a glittering cage. She aspires to be like Hanalea—the legendary warrior queen who killed the Demon King and saved the world. But it seems like her mother has other plans for her–plans that include a suitor who goes against everything the Queendom stands for.
The Seven Realms will tremble when the lives of Han and Raisa collide in this stunning new page-turner from bestselling author Cinda Williams Chima.
Now, I will admit that the first book took me almost half of the way through to decide I really loved it and wanted to keep reading. And yes, I am one who will persevere even though it may be a bit slow. I’m not sure why I didn’t connect immediately. I just didn’t. That being said as a warning for anyone who feels like putting the book down early on…DON’T. It’s well worth it to keep going.
The two main characters are interesting and unique, neither being a carbon copy of something that’s been done before. Han, especially, is a fascinating character — even more so as the books progress. Chima also paints a detailed world that is clear but not overly descriptive to the point where I started to skim. (Another of my bad habits when I’m not invested.)
And most of all, I LOVED the story. I love good characters, but I’m not a character drive book lover most of the time. I want a plot driven book that has great characters. And I got all of that here. I would recommend this book to anyone who loves fantasy. If you aren’t a huge fantasy reader but love a good story and are willing to read until you’re hooked, it would be a good fit for you, too.
Oh, I almost forgot…I love these covers. That alone makes me want to put them up on my bookshelf.
Late Saturday night I finished the first draft of a new novel. Yes, it’s YA. And yes, it’s fantasy (with a lot of romance). I’m super excited for this one. I’ve written a draft of a query letter that’s gotten great feedback on various writing forums. I’ve had a few early readers who have really loved it. And I even posted the first 250 words at on online writers conference and an agent bothered to comment, telling me it was a good start.
And I personally, LOVE it! Even though I’m just starting the revision process and I KNOW there are some needed changes.
Anyway, I thought I’d share my first 250 and get any feedback from all of you….
The siege had ended. Lord Kern, the dark mage, was dead.
Maren pushed her forehead against the warm glass, straining for a better view of the commotion below. A cheer went up from the crowd and Maren searched for any sign of the man making his way to the castle. The man who’d saved the city — and the kingdom.
All she could see was a mass of bodies, crowding the way leading up from the city gates to the castle.
It wasn’t uncommon to see people in the streets. They’d come every day for the past two and a half years, standing in subdued silence as they waited for the daily rations that grew more and more meager as the weeks went by. But today the crowd wasn’t silent. Today was different.
Maren raised her eyes. The tent cities beyond the wall, once teeming with the soldiers draining the city of life, were now abandoned, destroyed, thin plumes of smoke the only movement. Against that backdrop, the charred, barren fields look even more desolate.
Maren jumped back from the window and felt the color rise to her cheeks.
“It’s all right, Maren,” Queen Adare said, trying to get her own view of the street below. “We’re all curious. And you have more right than the rest of us. You knew him better than anyone.”
The dull, familiar ache in her chest forced Maren to hesitate until she was sure she could speak without her voice breaking. Even then, she couldn’t meet the queen’s eyes. “I’m not sure I knew him at all.”
This is a blog entry from the blog of someone I know from a writing forum. For those of you who don’t understand writing or think it’s easy, this is for you.
So there’s been a lot of talk lately about whether to self publish or not. I even attended a writers conference where an agent actually said there are two legitimate ways of getting published: the traditional method with an agent, etc. and self-publishing. It was the first time I’d actually heard self-publishing referred to as legitimate. In the past everyone’s kind of steered clear. It was only the desperate ones who couldn’t find an agent that went this route. Things have changed.
With the big publishers accepting fewer books, and consequently agents signing fewer clients (at least that’s what I’ve heard), there are some legitimately good books that are being self published. And some of the authors have made in the millions of dollars. Sounds great, right?
The problem is that there is still a lot of terrible stuff out there in the self publishing world. Often it’s never been seen by an editor. And the bigger problem: no publicity. How do you get your book name out there? How do you advertise? How do you attract the right audience?
So it may all boil down to a few simple things. Hire a freelance editor. Hire a publicist (or at least have some idea of what you’re doing and come up with a plan). OR still go with an agent. Not surprisingly, with the change to digital media (and all the monetary issues writers and publishers have been fighting about) and the ease of self publishing, there are agencies who are starting to guide their clients through the self publishing arena instead of just submitting to big traditional publishers. But then again, you have to attract an agent first. Are you starting to get as confused as I am????
Who knows where the future of books is going. Even Toys R Us is going to start selling the Kindle. Books at the push of a button? Sounds good. I’ve even done it. Maybe that should be my next post.
So, “Anna and the French Kiss.” This is a book I’d heard a lot about from a group of ladies on a forum I belong to. Some of them loved it some thought it was just good. I don’t read a lot of YA contemporary, so I didn’t quite know what I’d think. However, from the very first page I was hooked. Here’s a blurb from Amazon before I go any further.
Anna is not happy about spending senior year at a Paris boarding school, away from her Atlanta home, best friend Bridgette, and crush Toph. Adapting isn’t easy, but she soon finds friends and starts enjoying French life, especially its many cinemas; she is an aspiring film critic. Complications arise, though, when she develops feelings for cute—and taken—classmate Etienne, even though she remains interested in Toph. Her return home for the holidays brings both surprises, betrayals, unexpected support, and a new perspective on what matters in life—and love.
Ok, so girl goes to boarding school, likes guy with girlfriend…in Paris. Not the most unique premise ever. BUT, it’s’ hilarious. The first paragraph of the book talks about all the things she knows about Paris, which is really very little and revolves around pop culture. It just gets better from there because Anna’s voice and her outlook is just so enjoyable to read. I found myself laughing out loud more than once — and one time in particular I was laughing so hard I was crying and my husband was looking at me like I’d lost it. :). But the humor isn’t the only thing about the book I enjoyed. The characters felt real, the intricacies of teenage romance believable, and the misunderstandings relatable. All in all, one of my few ventures into YA contemporary was very enjoyable. Maybe I’ll even try again. :)
One note: I know there are some of my blog readers who are more conservative than others. There is a tiny bit of strong language and sexual reference that might be offensive to some.
Yes, I’ve decided not to call them “book reviews” any longer. I think it’s better for me to call them book recommendations and then only let you know about the books I would actually tell someone to read. It’s not that there aren’t books I don’t like, I just don’t want to publicly say bad things about other authors or their work. Heck, if I’m lucky, I might meet some of them someday. On Goodreads, I do rate books, and some have higher ratings than others, so take that however you want.
For Cassia, nothing is left to chance–not what she will eat, the job she will have, or the man she will marry. In Matched, the Society Officials have determined optimal outcomes for all aspects of daily life, thereby removing the “burden” of choice. When Cassia’s best friend is identified as her ideal marriage Match it confirms her belief that Society knows best, until she plugs in her Match microchip and a different boy’s face flashes on the screen. This improbable mistake sets Cassia on a dangerous path to the unthinkable–rebelling against the predetermined life Society has in store for her. As author Ally Condie’s unique dystopian Society takes chilling measures to maintain the status quo, Matched reminds readers that freedom of choice is precious, and not without sacrifice.
I really liked this book a lot. It was written well and kept my interest. It is very similar to “The Giver” by Lois Lowry if you’ve ever read that. This felt very realistic, and the world was easy to get into and enjoy. I also liked the main characters and their interactions and how they dealt with the issues that faced them. Some really rose above and I found myself really rooting for them. I’m excited for the second book in the series and would recommend this book to anyone who likes dystopian, and even those who don’t.
If for no other reason, read it just because the cover is absolutely BEAUTIFUL!!!
So this past weekend I was able to attend the LDS Storymakers writers conference. It was really good. I attended some interesting classes and met a lot of great people. Here were a few of my favorite people to hear: James Dashner, Jeff Savage, Sara Megibow, and Dave Wolverton. They all had great things to share. James and Jeff talked about the “hook.” It was really interesting, especially since James read his query for “The Maze Runner.” Sara talked about the process of publishing and it was very insightful, albeit a little overwhelming when she mentioned how many rejection letters they sent out last year. And Dave did a class on resonance. It was fascinating and I learned a lot from his discussion.
On a completely different note, I had a beta reader who read my book who came up with the best comparison. She said HEIR was like Shannon Hale meets Prince Caspian. I couldn’t have said it better!!!
And finally, I think I’ve had a great idea for what I’m going to write next. It’s a concept that’s been floating around for a while in my head, but I didn’t quite know how to add that something that would make it unique. I hope I’ve found the answer. It takes a dystopian theme of the characters’ reality not actually being reality and inserts magic instead of technology. We’ll see how it turns out. :)
No, I haven’t died or anything. I’ve just been busy. But I have a few tidbits of promising news to share.
First, a few weeks ago The Knight Agency did a contest via their blog where they were looking for new talent. I randomly got picked as one of the 125 people who got to send 3 pages of their manuscript. Then I got picked in the top 25. I got to send ten pages. Then I got picked in the top 15. I got to send three chapters. I did not make the top 3, but I was still very encouraged.
Second, I’ve had two full requests so far on my manuscript. I’ve already gotten a rejection on one. The second agent emailed me, apologized for the time it had taken, and asked if I’d found representation yet or if they could have more time. So, there’s still hope. And there’s still agents I haven’t heard anything from. Fingers crossed.
Yes, I’ve gotten four. I just have to keep reminding myself that that’s all right. Every book isn’t for everyone. If you don’t like fantasy, you probably don’t want to read my book. If you do…well, then I hope you’ll love it. And I have to admit, I wish I could get someone to read my whole book and then tell me they don’t want it.
Which leads to what’s worrying me lately…that my query is good, but something is missing. I write fantasy. Fantasy has certain themes. Mine isn’t an exception. Soooooo, I’m worried that my query is great at giving a synopsis about what the story is about…BUT it doesn’t adequately convey why mine is different, unique, worth reading. I’m going to think on it some more before I send out anything else.